Post by melpend on Jul 15, 2022 16:52:09 GMT -5
Thank you in advance for any feedback!
When twelve-year-old Lacy discovers her new house is haunted, she must solve the mystery in order to help the people she cares about the most. But if she can’t overcome her own fear of the dark, she risks losing her home and letting down those to whom she owes everything.
UPDATE: I just watched Jocelyn Rish's "Practice Makes Pitch Perfect" so I came up with something completely different! The pitch still needs some work but hopefully it's on the right track. Again, thank you in advance for any feedback!
NEW PITCH:
When a twelve-year-old orphan discovers her new house is haunted, she must overcome her fear of the dark to expose the thieving ghost and save her home.
When twelve-year-old Lacy discovers her new house is haunted, she must solve the mystery in order to help the people she cares about the most. But if she can’t overcome her own fear of the dark, she risks losing her home and letting down those to whom she owes everything.
UPDATE: I just watched Jocelyn Rish's "Practice Makes Pitch Perfect" so I came up with something completely different! The pitch still needs some work but hopefully it's on the right track. Again, thank you in advance for any feedback!
NEW PITCH:
When a twelve-year-old orphan discovers her new house is haunted, she must overcome her fear of the dark to expose the thieving ghost and save her home.
