Post by midenianscholar on Feb 4, 2017 19:52:25 GMT -5
Ha! This is a sweet little story.
Given that publishers seem to be reluctant with rhyme, I'm not sure this one's script is strong enough to encourage them to take a risk on it. For instance, "bean" and "sweet" don't follow the end-rhyme/slant-rhyme form the other stanzas take (for the most part). Perhaps free yourself of the rhyme and experiment some more with this text?