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Post by liwayway on Feb 8, 2019 16:40:18 GMT -5
A time traveler, a spy, a shape-shifter, an inventor, and an assassin seek the magical pieces of a broken giant to save their world from an ancient monster. Pacific Rim meets Middle Earth. #YAFantasy
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Post by samsamiamam on Feb 8, 2019 17:12:17 GMT -5
Sounds interesting! You've hit all the major elements. The only thing I might suggest is giving us a little more about the obstacles that get in their way as they seek the magical pieces. Is there a special place to find these pieces?
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Post by liwayway on Feb 8, 2019 19:40:29 GMT -5
Sounds interesting! You've hit all the major elements. The only thing I might suggest is giving us a little more about the obstacles that get in their way as they seek the magical pieces. Is there a special place to find these pieces? Thank you for your time and feedback! To tackle the addition of obstacles, I was thinking about mentioning the other forces and groups that are searching for the magical pieces. I just need to figure out how to word that in a Twitter limit.  Maybe something like...
A time traveler, a spy, a shape-shifter, an inventor, and an assassin need to find the magical pieces of a broken giant before the zealous Order does to save their world from an ancient monster. Pacific Rim meets Middle Earth. #YAFantasy
The pieces are scattered and hidden in this world. My 5 characters are strangers to each other in the beginning. They find some of the pieces on their own, and finding them is the reason they meet to begin with.
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Post by kmurphy on Feb 9, 2019 0:23:00 GMT -5
I feel you on the twitter limit. Clear stakes w/ conflict, and interesting comps; heading to your pages.
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